Tuesday 24 December 2013

What the Dicken's - It's 'A Christmas Present'.

The final published version of ‘A Christmas Carol’ bore little resemblance to his original draft. The publishers felt Dicken’s first version was too bleak and too futuristic for Victorian sensibilities. Here, for the first time, is his original story.

A Christmas Present

For Ebenezer Scrooge, Christmas had become a season that brought the lowest of spirits to him. The sight of streets filled with the poor and the lame, the lost and the helpless were visions that scarred his heart and soul and haunted him.

Yet, for those with plenty, this was time of joy as they could celebrate the Lord’s humble birth with excess and self-congratulation. Ebenezer struggled with their greed and self importance in their honouring the little prophet.

As Scrooge carried out his ablutions on Christmas Eve he stared into the mirror and offered a prayer that at some point in the future Christmas would be celebrated with a true spirit. A hope that this season could truly mark the point in the calendar where those with fortune and power would reach out a caring and generous arm to those who suffer. A prayer that the increasing gap between rich and poor could be bridged.

As Scrooge lay his head upon his chilled pillow he heard the first toll of the church bell sound midnight. Even with closed eyes he was aware of a blinding light filling his room. With trepidation he opened one eye and saw a massive spectre beckoning him with outstretched bony finger. Scrooge pulled back his threadbare sheets and stood before the ghostly manifestation.

Although he did not speak it was as if Scrooge could hear the very thoughts of the dark spirit. “You have prayed for a future where man cares for man, where those with fortune and power will reach out a caring and generous arm to those who suffer. Come with me I will show you what this season will
become.”

“Spirit,” spoke Scrooge, “Should you not take me back to the past then show me the present before this vision of what is to come?”

“Whatever gave you that idea? Open your eyes to the future”.

Scrooge opened his eyes and saw scenes of hunger, war, sickness and poverty. “Why does this still happen Spirit? Is the world poorer”.

“No,” said the Spirit. “There is more wealth than ever, more cures for illness....”

“Then why does this still happen?” screamed Scrooge.

“Because those with greed in their hearts need war to sell weapons, they need illness to sell medicines, there is little profit to be found in peace and health.”

“The little prophet,” thought Scrooge as he was whisked to another scene.

Here was another room unlike any he had seen before. Here was a small window occupied by midgets who were singing badly with large ‘X’s above the heads. Yet no one could see  or hear them as they were staring at a small child who was screaming like a banshee whilst throwing coloured paper and other objects around the room.

“What is wrong with him Spirit? What pains him so much? Can no one do anything?”

The Spirit uncurled the fingers of one hand to reveal a small gold tube. “He cries for this.”

“If this is medicine give it to him now for I cannot stand to see this family’s pain for one moment longer.”

“This is not medicine but energy. In the future man creates enormous power in these small things. It is called a battery.

“But if this has such power why is there still such hardship?”

“Because this power and invention is used to run games, toys and entertainment to stop people having to think how others may suffer.”

Scrooge found his voice cracking as he spoke. “So things do not get better they get worse. I cannot ignore the needs of the poor and the hungry. You must have shown me this so I can change things. You must take me back so I can start the change.

“You must remember what you have seen is just a vision of what could be. This ‘battery’ is a future. The present is not included.”



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